Reviews for Sealed Wings |
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![]() ![]() Damn you've got talent keep WRITING DON'T YOU DARE TO STOP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Please write more! Love KAYLA BROWN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update asap! Can't wait for the next chapter! Au Revoir! |
![]() ![]() i hope you don't take this the wrong way. it's not meant to be a bitchy comment, just some constructive criticism. okay. you have a wonderful storyline. i enjoy it, i really do. but darling, your grammer needs some renovating. don't hate me; constructive criticism, remember? i've noticed some spelling errors, run on sentences, and a few other things. i would suggest getting a beta to clean it up. i'm not saying i hate your story, i like it a lot, honestly. it's just that i'm a grammer nazi and poor grammer makes me want to throw something. so clean up the grammer mistakes, and keep on writing because i am really looking forward to finding out what happens. |
![]() ![]() Hi realy like your story :D i have allways been in too vampire storys and like that. This is first time i have started to read something like this:D and i realy liked it... keep up like this:-) please give the next chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! THIS WAS SO CUTE! *contented sigh*...Kaci and Ion seem so HAPPY together! i wonder who strangeled Kaci's would-be rapist...does that play a part in the story? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! Please keep writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww... poor kaci. i'm totally in love with ion. he's great. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im a bit confused, what does the fact that kacis power showed up have to do with ions mothers healing potion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this The chemistry Ion and Kaci have is so (I cant even think of a word that fits) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww that is so sweet. i love Ion. he is just adorable. please update soon. i want to see more softness form our great evil bully :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY!(-) Can't wait for update! |