|Reviews for User|
| L. Cybert chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Ah. This is just plain lovely. It's very interesting and I enjoyed the description and writing style.
| LaButterfly chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Gosh, this poem breaks my heart. I just want to hug the girl and help make things better... If only people could realize how valuable others are, and let them KNOW that. Let her know she's loved... But I'm rambling. Very emotionally evocative and thought-producing. All in all, I'd say you accomplished your goal (few poets, especially those who have experienced deep pain, aim not to affect their readers).