Reviews for Our Song
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
you will move on, you have to have faith that your life is not determined by one individual, especially in (well im assuming) highschool. I know how you feel, some things are just so ingrained as being between you two that it hurts to be reminded, but that feeling will pass.

This one has a lot more of your old couplet style that I loved. Therefor, I like this one :) If I may suggest, you may want to work on meter and rhythm and make it flow more smoothly. Other than that it was beautiful :D