|Reviews for Vicious Cycle|
| QueenLaughter chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
A great poem. I love the rhymes, the idea, everything.
PS You wrote the name of the camp incorrectly - it's "Auschwitz".
| xx-Lauren-xx chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Wow, this one is beautiful.
"The Chloroform sank in slowly, and they would bleed their last tears. / And this same horrendous cycle was allowed to carry on for years." is probably my favorite two lines in the whole thing. They encorporate the whole thing into just 24 words. And the whole "bleed their last tears" thing is just plain awesome.
Keep it up!