Reviews for The Lion
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
again, very heavy-handed symbolism that's like a sermon pretending to be a poem. my most heartfelt suggestion is that you pull back from writing on the GLOBAL scale and instead zoom in very, very close on one or a few characters, and what they feel. when you do that, your point of view will still be present and still emerge, but the reader won't feel clobbered over the head with it. imo.