Reviews for The Prettiest Thing
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
It was pretty long but it was also very interesting and easy to read. Ella and Brett seem like really interesting characters so I can't wait to read more :D
BanishedPrince chapter 20 . 5/17/2009
Hi, I just finished reading your story, The Prettiest Thing and I just wanted to stop and tell you that I really enjoyed it. It was really great. Good Job!
Rav chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Well, I know you thought this story was somewhat cliched but thats fine by me considering how beautifully you put it...I confess to being biased and breathlessly waiting for the parts about Brett and Ella most of all but you definitely interwove all their lives without making it seem overdone...I must say that it was a little cruel to leave people like me hanging after that first addictive and amazing chapter of the Sweetest Thing-sort of like placing a bite of chocolate cake in front of a chocaholic and saying thats all they can have from the three layered cake!Since im ranbling i think its obvious that im dying to read more!Thankyou/
Kiki chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I LOVE this story...when my friend told me about it i was interested in reading it at not even half way through and i have recommended it to all my friends that read...i think it is one of the best stories i have read in years...i put it in the top of all my lists...above the twilight series ...i would like to thank you for writing such a great work of art for us all to enjoy...i hope to become as great of an author as you some day :)
Bobbster chapter 8 . 5/13/2009
so far so good, i absolutely adore this story

i really don't think it's trevor.. it must be joy :P
AJ southern chapter 20 . 5/10/2009
I love how open ended this story is. The epilogue guided your thoughts about the future but didn't finalize them. We can all dream about their future. Very captivating. :)
Story Lover chapter 1 . 5/9/2009

OMG this is the most amazing story I have ever read! Have you checked out ? You have over 100,0 views!Please get it published soon I will definetly buy a copy tho i have already read it to support you! You are very talented and I can't wait for the rest of The Sweetest Thing. Thanks again for giving us all such an amazing story!
aj79k40 chapter 20 . 4/29/2009
Really great story! I especially loved the fact that you kept several stories going at the same time!
AlexisLovesYou chapter 20 . 4/27/2009
VNNOpVWIJd chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
very well written.. good plot.. this definitely kick goody-goody twilight hard in the ass )
Lausie chapter 7 . 4/21/2009

coz i've now read all your other stories i now know who olivia and ben are! i love that you make reference to other characters from other stories, although it kinda spoils the ending to More than Anyone (but as if i didn't know that they're gonna fall in love and get married!)

anywho, great work - you've sure got me hooked! this is the 2nd time i'm reading the prettiest thing

MyLifeIsMe chapter 19 . 4/16/2009
Ive read this before but honestly, amazing story, great characters and i loved every second i stayed up to read it... your my favorite author on this site :D x
Jessica chapter 20 . 4/16/2009
I just wanted to let you know that I've read two stories of yours now. BOTH of which were extremely good. There were parts that I enjoyed more than others, and times where i stopped reading for a couple of days. But that's the way it is when several people read books. You are a very talented writer, and I'm sorry some people have told you otherwise. I hope to see more from you again. I really enjoy reading your stories.


jessixa chapter 14 . 4/13/2009
um um um

i'm not even done with this chapter yet and your story is really really good, you write really really well, but i just wanted to tell you before i forget that at "he wound his fist back and crashed it in the side of Monty’s face, punching him." it would sound way better without the "punching him" part. just leave those words off.

maybe you wrote it like that for a reason though?

i don't know, i like to edit haha.

i'm going to go back to reading now!
Hazzybg chapter 20 . 4/13/2009
It was awesome.

I was just wondering how you came to this story, and how lon ago did you write it?
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