Reviews for None of The Above
DiaRose chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
Oh, didn't see that coming! Nice ending, it's very rythmic a poem and then it just gets to the point, and it's beautiful, I love it.


MissMelodie chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
i like how you wrote this, it flows really easily
Paperclippe chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I love the form of this. You took a common sentiment and turned it into something wonderful with something as simple as a line break.
Kassia Scarlett chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Whoa! Talk about a surprise ending! I was reading it thinking "Aww, how sweet!" And then that last line...whoa! Like shattering glass! I like!
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Yet again something someone can relate to. Bravo to you.
UnDesiredRomance chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Wow, I just love your poems.