Reviews for sunrisesunset
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
i'm loving the quirkiness of the last line.

:)
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
The last stanza is my favorite. The ideas you convey in this poem are beautiful, and it's not overly-long which is definitely a plus. Cool title, also.

Something you would perhaps be interested to hear(?): when I saw the list of poems you appreciated reviews on in your profile, my first thought was that the list itself was a poem. And I really liked it as a poem, too; I didn't understand most of it, but it had a beautiful look and sound to it. So now you know. You made accidental confusing/pretty poetry. :)

Keep writing and have a lovely day!
Isca chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
"That skip in my step? It's your fault." Aww :D That's such a cute line!