|Reviews for Protected|
| infinite101 chapter 2 . 9/14/2010
aww i wish i had the chance to read this fic it sounds great!
i've put this on alert in the hope that i might be able to read it sometime,
good luck with the publishing! i sincerely hope it works out for you
| alexet88 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
this story has been on my favorites list for a while, so when i went back to re-read, i noticed you removed it. I feel lucky to have read it when i did because it was just that good. it was a mature plot with great characters. When this gets published, I'll be first in line to buy it. Good luck and don't let this story go.
| Bug chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Yay I'm so excited for you! I absolutely love this story and if you end up getting it published it would be wonderful! Good luck with everything and keep us posted on how you are doing with this story!
| Vividus chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Good luck with getting it published! It's a lovely story, really, and although every author probably has trouble getting published, I'm sure you'll make it there. You have talent, I think.
| xoxokristen chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
good luck getting published! let me know if you do so i can buy it :)
| Mell8 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Good luck with the publishing industry! I think your story is more than good enough to be published, and if it is published please tell me so I can buy it. I will miss having this story up to re-read, but as long as you're posting the sequel, I'm happy.
| Amelia chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Aw man! haha I was at chapter 30..almost done. But what I read was great so keep up the good work and good luck with publishing.
| goldenspork chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Aw, I just started reading this! Oh well. Good luck with publishing. What I read was really good.
| DLETE THIS OLD chapter 10 . 5/2/2009
lol "lyubimaya" does mean sweetheart...but in the sense that it is being said to a girl...for a guy however, it would be "lyubimiy"
| DLETE THIS OLD chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
“Bezumny devochka!”-correct term would be "bezumnaya devushka" "bezumny" is masculine and "devochka" is like saying little girl, "devushka" is the term used for older girls, like teen and up.
“Khorosho Zhizn”-better phrasing would be "Khoroshaya Zhizn" ...in russian, the term "life" is feminine, so feminine endings are used
:) otherwise, this is remarkably good for only using a dictionary lol
and awesome job on the story :D
| DLETE THIS OLD chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
pretty good so far...russian is like one of my first languages...and i think that you are doing pretty well with it :D
except that part where you wrote "The woman at the bar was only slightly pyanitsa..." (4th paragraph) That word literally means drunkard...the correct word in this instance would be "pyannaya", which is "drunk",with a feminine ending
lol just thought i would mention it :D
| Chezzles.ze.Great chapter 32 . 5/1/2009
New research says women can have some alcohol, though never regularly, when pregnant. They can go to communion. They can have a glass of wine at dinner. They can taste-test their husbands new beer concoction, all without being an irresponsible harlot. It's true.
And it's spelled "alcohol."
| Umm chapter 32 . 5/1/2009
You do know that if a pregnant woman has even one glass of alcohal her baby can have FASD? Pregnant women can't have ANY alcohal.
| xxBitterRomancexx chapter 36 . 4/29/2009
One word. WOW.
This story was absolutely fabulous. It was throughly entertaining to read as well as being very well written. I hope you write a sequel. I really really did enjoy reading it the dynamics of the story and the characters interactions really were outstanding. Please write a sequel.
| theslykit chapter 36 . 4/29/2009
absolutely brilliant! and it makes me want to teach myself russian too! i always thought it was a harsh and ugle language but reading it in your story..it sounds and looks beautiful! :D you should teach me! hahaha anways this is definitely top 10 for me!~ kudos!