Reviews for Red Looks Good On You
yaminoname chapter 10 . 3/11/2009
Im seriously wondering whats going to happen next. I seriously can not guess whats going to happen next and so im seriously hoping that you will update soon!
buzzgirl37 chapter 7 . 2/8/2009
Woah...I'm so confused right now...

Though I did like the change in POV, and the background info I did understand :)

I can't wait for the next chapter, and now I'm secrtly hopeful that there will be some Vamp on Vamp sex later on lol, Cain and Macabre :D

Sorry this review's short and everything but I haven't been able to get on my internet for a while so I've got lots of stories to read and review on here :D
buzzgirl37 chapter 6 . 2/8/2009
Sorry this took me ages to get round to reading!

Yes Lucy is absolutely and utterly terrifying...and she's based on your mum? I'm more than a little scared...

I loved how jealous Valkir was getting in this chapter, it was sweet...umm not really the right word but the only one I could come up with.

And yes Vamp Sex :) It was soo much quicker than in Faust's Awakening but that's cus they had a relationship first and everything...

Anyway...I'm going to go read the next chapter now..
buzzgirl37 chapter 5 . 1/16/2009
YOu know two chapters at once is off putting, i want to review both but i cant wait to read the next. BUT I LOVE YOU cus it was two chapters! AND awesome you dedicated it to me, i'm chuffed 'cus it was an amazing chapter! I'm trying to explain to a guy I know over msn how awesome getting a chapter dedicated to me is, but he's severly uncomfortable because i mentioned "paranormal slash erotica" but whatever.

I so thought we wouldn't get any sex for ages because of the last chapter and the prophacy and crazy Lucy but YES! SO once again im going to proclaim my love for you !

Lucy is going to murder them! and what about the prophecy! AHH! I need the next chapter!

Although I've become very suspicious of writers lately and I've started thinking that they've all got horrid twists and turns! what if the sex scene wasn't real? It all started after he started writing maybe it's some of his erotica! See you need to update again because I need to know that my suspicions are wrong, and i need some more Devin and Valkir *stuff* (I wrote *stiff* the first time i wrote this...ah how appropriate that spelling mistake is...)

So yeh can't wait for an update :D
me chapter 4 . 1/14/2009
just to say i think your story is awesome,

and christine feehan is so cool :)
buzzgirl37 chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
Loved this chapter.

Devi is very very bad! Shouldn't have done that..but still why'd Lucy have to interrupt? AHh well we'll find out in the next chapter when she explains everything.

I'm liking Valkir even more now. He's perverted..it's hot.

Belt buckle thing I thought was funny.

And Man is Lucy scary.

Anyways can't wait for the next chapter for the explaining...although do we get some action still? :D
Jevanminx chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
Oh, slight drama in there I liked it, well done.

JM
buzzgirl37 chapter 2 . 11/26/2008
Woah lots of dialogue...

:) It's been a while since I've read some mind-reading vampire fiction, so yay...!

I like them it's cute in a perverse way.

His train of thought is great, the right questions are asked :)

Can't wait for the next chapter (wow short review...)
Jevanminx chapter 2 . 11/26/2008
Aw, so sweet, I do so love those two, hehehehe.

JM
Jevanminx chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Oh cool. Interesting way for a guy falling from a 6th story building to act, but that just makes being a vampire all the greater, hehehe.

JM
buzzgirl37 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Is it wrong that licking blood covered lips is slightly erotic...? It's just a little weird...not wrong :)

New story! I do love a vampire story especially when they seem to take an instant liking to the poor human. Unfortunately there just aren't enough gay vampires out there, all the stories I find them in are just one shots :( So you made me happy!

Does the fact that you said my name gave you the idea mean that there's gonna be proper porny stuff quite early on :D?

Cus this isn't really the kinda relationship like Faust and Met so I see sex happening first then more of the romancey stuff, though that might just be my hope.

Devin's train of thought is great, he's just like "Huh?" every so often. With the "happy pills" and the "I wasn't gay." You can kinda see these thoughts racing through his mind as he stands there are stares.

Anyway can't wait for the next chapter...!

ps. cus I already reviewed chap8 Faust's Awakening just gonna say loved Mets, he is awesome. The fact that he's fantasising about a student who's ten years his junior while in the staffroom makes him even greater. He makes me laugh.