SCHME i cant beleive you didn't tell me that you posted your english assignment on fictionpress i am hurt! oh well i am going to post mine cause my english teacher said it was written like a true chapter of a story! how cool is that getting told that by your english teacher!

i feel special. and i don't need to read your story to know that it is great! seriously sam you were like born to write stories!

ok chow! hehe

LOVE LALA

OMG! This is a BEAUTIFUL STORY! Although there are some places that seem a bit too rushed - you could have expanded it a little - but overall, this is amazing! I really think you should keep on writing these kind of stuff! NO, you SHOULD WRITE ANYHTHING! EVERYTHING! Is this really your first story? This is really just wonderful... I just can't say anything more. Keep it up!

Narq.