Reviews for Fade to Black
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Wow. That was a good piece. I really like the idea and attitude. The character is very realistic. I think you should add a few other sensory descriptions-the sounds of police's feet tapping on the roof, or the pain of the knife, things like that so that people can touch it. Right now there are good thought processes, however. Also, I think you need to work on some of your word choices. Other than that, it is a great idea and a very good start.
Naja Copperleaf chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
I really like the title, and your writing is very good. Impressive. ;)
DavePoole24 chapter 1 . 5/5/2001
Powerful stuff!
Seroci chapter 1 . 4/30/2001
Exceptionally written. I love the passage " Of course it has to be this way. If I had a choice about it, you think I would be up here? Destiny exists. There's no two ways about it. Maybe some have the ability to control it, take hold of it, shape it to what they want, some don't. I don't. Mine is like a car spiraling out of control. A long, downward spiral." Never in my dreams could I write something that could match that. Beautiful all the way around.
Snark chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
Thou are God.