Reviews for Work It Out
Isca chapter 12 . 1/23/2009
"The epic joy that runs through me is laughable." This opening line is absolutely stunning!

"But happiness is ours, and I'll clutch hope to my chest." A very well-written line!

"For now, we live." BEAUTIFUL!

Isca chapter 11 . 1/16/2009
I like the overall flow of the poem; it's unique!

"I love your happiness,

it's our friendship I mourn."

Excellent final lines! They're full of angst, bitterness, and sadness!

Cixi chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Thank you for the review.

In return I have read your more recent work and

I'm very impressed at the form of imagery you use.

You wrapped this piece up very well with

The last line:

"Watch the meltdown"

softersin chapter 10 . 1/5/2009

this is painful.

i like it :)

i know where youre coming from.
softersin chapter 9 . 12/6/2008
ode to melancholy chapter 8 . 12/4/2008
Very nice.
ode to melancholy chapter 3 . 12/4/2008
Couldn't be assed, I guess.
ode to melancholy chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
You're great with metaphors.
softersin chapter 8 . 12/3/2008
you know exactly how im feeling.

strange, but awesome. XD

.. i loved it : D
softersin chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
softersin chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
"You're screaming in riddles

and breaking my heart again."

That got to me.

:) loved it.
softersin chapter 5 . 11/21/2008
holy shit.

this has got to be one of the best pieces i have read in a long time.

i love how i can relate to it.

my favorite collection so far :)
softersin chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
This is simply amazing.

I have no words to describe it.

softersin chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
i had several interpretations for this one,

and could relate to one of them very well.

great job.
softersin chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
the last line struck me.

you have a way with words.
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