|Reviews for Work It Out|
| Isca chapter 12 . 1/23/2009
"The epic joy that runs through me is laughable." This opening line is absolutely stunning!
"But happiness is ours, and I'll clutch hope to my chest." A very well-written line!
"For now, we live." BEAUTIFUL!
| Isca chapter 11 . 1/16/2009
I like the overall flow of the poem; it's unique!
"I love your happiness,
it's our friendship I mourn."
Excellent final lines! They're full of angst, bitterness, and sadness!
| Cixi chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Thank you for the review.
In return I have read your more recent work and
I'm very impressed at the form of imagery you use.
You wrapped this piece up very well with
The last line:
"Watch the meltdown"
| softersin chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
this is painful.
i like it :)
i know where youre coming from.
| softersin chapter 9 . 12/6/2008
AMAZING ! :)
| ode to melancholy chapter 8 . 12/4/2008
| ode to melancholy chapter 3 . 12/4/2008
Couldn't be assed, I guess.
| ode to melancholy chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
You're great with metaphors.
| softersin chapter 8 . 12/3/2008
you know exactly how im feeling.
strange, but awesome. XD
.. i loved it : D
| softersin chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
| softersin chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
"You're screaming in riddles
and breaking my heart again."
That got to me.
:) loved it.
| softersin chapter 5 . 11/21/2008
this has got to be one of the best pieces i have read in a long time.
i love how i can relate to it.
my favorite collection so far :)
| softersin chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
This is simply amazing.
I have no words to describe it.
| softersin chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
i had several interpretations for this one,
and could relate to one of them very well.
| softersin chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
the last line struck me.
you have a way with words.