Reviews for You're Indecent
The Concept of Breathing chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Wow, that was beautiful. Really, really beautiful.

I liked that last stanza the most. amazing.

-the concept of breathing
K. Molle chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
what a very wide vocab you have...a lot bigger than mine. They way you embedded big words into your writing worked very well, so write more good stuff!
fictionalxbliss chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Woah, again. Have you ever thought of getting published? Have you been published?

Because this is amazing. You should look into it. Soon.
Paperclippe chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Beautiful, lush language. Very nice.