|Reviews for Nothing Says 'I Love You' More than Slavery|
| Raven syz chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
luved it so much so awesome and i laughed wen i red almost all de chaps luvin james and may
| CEO of BMW chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
See you in court.
| Muffinmaster1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I like the prologue! There's nothing I can really say to improve it though. For some reason it doesn't really draw me in. It doesn't look like my kind of story but I'll give it a chance, I heard it's good.
I think you did really good though, it looks like you put some effort into this! So give yourself a pat on the back!
| Da-zGreen chapter 17 . 7/20/2010
Okay, I would love to read more of May and James and hear a background about Monica and Matt. So doesn't really matter. heheheh
| Da-zGreen chapter 16 . 7/20/2010
I liked the story. It had a lot of humor. She is so freaking funny. One question though, did James liked her before she broke his car window? heheheeh You never really told us when he started liking her. Anyways, hope there is a sequel. hehehe
| Crestfallen Smile. Happy Tears chapter 15 . 7/6/2010
That was just too cute! and funny. It made me laugh the whole time.
| Abrasive chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
Your story lacked substance, logic, and humour. Apparently none of these high school students have parents. The main character was airheaded, prejudiced and plain annoying. I didn't even manage to read halfway through because there is no real plot to your story, it's just two people living together and not really doing anything.
| MyNameIs-Madison chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
I love this chapter (5). It was funny , made me laugh out loud which made my brother think i was crazy .
| kala chapter 9 . 1/14/2010
omg in all my life i have never read a story so funny1 i'm laughing constanly!
| annoyed chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
this one of the most annoying shit i have ever read. what the hell is wrong with the girl why cant she think full sentences instead of crap like boo.i .im such a bubbleheaded idiot. if somebodys clumsy dosnt mean their idiots.g also wats with slapping- newsflash nobody in their right mind does that. so for pete sake start using full complex sentences rather that words and fullstops. geez its like a blonde 13 yr old wrote this shit
| Scarlet Dawn chapter 9 . 1/5/2010
LMAO! THAT WAS FUNNY!
| Scarlet Dawn chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
Damn! Lol. Poor May. james is such a... not gonna end that sentence. Awesome story so far!
| Scarlet Dawn chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
| Aris24 chapter 16 . 1/4/2010
Omg the best... HUH RANDOM AND HAlariose
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 17 . 12/27/2009
hehe, great story!