Reviews for Invisible
pacific.babe chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Mimi! lmao

Believe me when i say this is one of the best poems i've ever read.


I love it!

A Sensuous Darkness chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Painful poem. I like the repetition of She [verb], at the beginning of each stanza, and the two No one lines at the end. I think that we go through the hardest parts of our lives alone, which paradoxically is part of why they are the hardest parts.

Writing poetry is a great way to undo the invisibility spell cast by another. Keep up the good work.