Reviews for Sleeping world
Mandisaurus-rex chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Aw, wow, I really love it... So well written. My favourite line ever is "Snowflake after snowflake gently kissed the grounds surface..."

Really pretty imagery there...

But I think I noticed two mistakes. The first one; "Her eyes slowly losing that brilliant sparkle" I think a 'were' should go between eyes and slowly.

And; "...so she could view the white sparkling desert in from of them." 'from' should be 'front', me thinks )

Anyways though, this was a very enjoyable read! Amazing work!

Mandi