Crazy, frenzied action packed first chapter with info about the characters. I'm interested so far

Still worth the read Keep em coming :)

Still worth reading :)

So far, so good :)

The last little bit was just... perfect.

"If you didn't already know... my name is Jade.

I'm not rich, or smart, or pretty... but I can fight, and I have a good life. Not to mention I have wonderful friends. And all of us... we stand together, in both good times and bad. And especially... when times get tough. Just like now.

And I think... at the end of the day, that's we really need."

I just love that so much! It would be so cool if you could continue this into another story where there helping Ciara's team. Don't think i didn't notice how you slipped that in that there in trouble. Or the question mark after End. I can't believe this story is finally done... Wow... You did a great job! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! Ciao for now.

Kristi

I'm sorry it took so long for me to read this. But holy crap! I was not expecting that at all! And now he is gone forever. You will never have to write his name again. Wow, what a way to go... I'm glad she got to have a life with him. Did they go to a parallel universe or something? Now I have to go read the last chapter! Only took you a little less than eight years to finish! I'm so proud of you! Okay on to the next chapter! Ciao.

Amazing chapter! I'm so happy right now! And I'm so proud of you! I can't wait to read more! And about Damarion I dunno what animal he liked most. Your Damarion and my Damarion are very different. His form was a snake but I don't think that will help much with this battle. So I guess you'll get to choose! I can't wait for more! So please continue to write and don't make me wait too too long! Ciao for now.

Kristi

Yo this is a pretty strange but sick story would love to read more

I like the way the story begins with action but I would like to know how they found themselves in the fight in the first place and if they tried to escape and why where they imprisoned and why the alien helped them. It leaves a lot of questions and it sure sounds interesting however it feels like something is not right if you are writing a romance story it starts strangely if you are writing a simple sci fiction story than it sounds already very right. Good luck with it

Well I'm really glad you were able to write for this story again! I still have the urge to hit Pilot over the head... May I just say I love love love the part where Damarion is telling Pilot to calm down! "You are the most excitable human I have ever met," "I myself have just been shot, and I am not screaming madly, as you are." I was dying when I read that! hahaha Any ways... Great chapter! I really hope you'll be able to finally finish this story! I hope to work on a few of my ff stories soon... Any ways ttyl! Ciao for now.

Kristi

Great chapter! Its great to see you writing again! I actually wrote something for Gray Leaves last night. I'm changing its title some time soon. I dont like the title anymore. Keep up the great work!

Kristi

I really like the changes! One of these days I'm going to have to go back and reread the whole story! Good job darlin!

These first few chapters are good. They are a bit streamlined and fast moving but sometimes that's a good thing, I've always thought you can go too far into detail and wind up losing your reader. Glad to Jade is still up and running.

rofl Poor poor Jade... But at least its not a secret anymore! And the last bit with Pilot. rofl Love it. hehehe Keep up the great work!

Kristi

I loved the beginning! Poor Rtaia... How would you say her name? Any ways... The end kind of confused me but I'm sure the next chapter will clear it up for me! More soon please! lol

Kristi