Reviews for Boundaries
Tariss-Lightning chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Wow, that was amazing! I liked the short style and the way that it fit together so nicely.

Also, crime stories appeal to me quite a lot, so good on you for writing it. Great job!
blurrylights chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
That was super creepy...scary Nathan. I totally wasn't expecting that. So Luke slept with someone he shouldn't have?
VampirexBite chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
amazing ending, totaly twisted

though i didnt understand what Nathan was talking about right before he pushed Luke.

who did he sleep with that he shouldnt have?
M.E. Scar chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
woah...chilling. I like how straightforward it is.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
I like the straightforward narrative to this piece. It gets to the point quickly and keeps the story moving.

Woah, scary friends much? I was kind of dissatisfied with the ending to this story. I understand that Nathon likes boundaries, but still, it kind of caught me off guard.

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Delaney Promises chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
woah. excellent pace, everything flows together quite nicely, definitely a success.