Reviews for When Finally Set Free |
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![]() ![]() ah well, their moment of bliss didn't last long did it? gosh, her sisters' a bit bitchy. lol i love that jeremy wants her back - its gunna get a whole lot more interesting now. Cheers for the quick update! |
![]() ![]() Oh wonderful chapter! God I just wanna kill Jeremy! He is not on my like list. Great update! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay you updated. Another yay for patrick and emily being together now. You succeeded the last part was PG. haha I can't wait for what to happen next. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh baby that's hot LOL please tell me nothing bad will happen? please please please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ABOUT TIME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking love this story! I'm also glad that they have ended up together - so far at least. It would really suck if something happened to either of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() woo, everything's sorted and happy, yay! cya next time ~ Alenor |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad they "sealed the deal" as Melissa would say. No more questions now about whether one likes the other or not. Hopefully :) Update soon! summers-end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! FInally! LOL! A little bit more detail would have been AWEsome! Keer Writing and please Update SOON... Like... Maybe NOW! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! Seal the deal...unless you do something mean and say that he stopped or she stopped him or he says something stupid...oh dear we'll see |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! How could you end the chapter with that cliffhanger and not update for a month? Lol, I'm dying here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so, I just had to review, and that's not something I do very often. First, the whole scene where Patrick apologized... ugh, so... intense and so... well, point is I loved it, and I love this story but... CLIFFHANGER? Really? Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens, I mean, I think it's pretty obvious but... yeah, just update. Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right. I have been reading your story for hours now, and I absolutely love it! I think I may have started it ages ago but forgot to save it to faves so I didn't find it til now, but I'm so glad I did! I love your two main characters, they're ace! Yes, cliffhangers are a great part of any story but you have to continue before it kills me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Been reading this story for a while and just wanted to let you know that I really love how you manage to bring the emotion across so well in your writing. I feel like I'm actually sitting in the room and feeling the awkwardness like no other. Keep up the good work and really looking forward to the next update! |