Reviews for When Finally Set Free |
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![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I love how your character's are so mature and yet, with that in mind, you still can add that twinge of confusion and emotional turmoil that everyone goes through, making them seem all the more REAL. But not at all childish, or anything of the sort. I'm only on chapter 13 and I ABSOLUTELY love the chemistry you created between Patrick and Emily. AH I was so happy when I found out the story wasn't done yet :D ! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! That was the best cliffhanger ending ever! And I loved that Emily initiated this conversation. Although if I'd had to wait 3 long rings before he'd picked up, I would definitely have lost my courage and hung up. I'm glad you've still got a good chunk of the story left. I don't want it to end. Update soon! summers-end |
![]() ![]() Ugh it just gets better and better! The poor pair. Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Yay! awesome chapteR! I cried and laughed and jumped up and down like a ten year old! yay you! Keep Writing and please update soon! Oh, and honey, your stuff is much better than New Moon! ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yess, maybe things ARE starting to get better! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWS PATRICK IS SUCH A CUUTIE GAHAHAHAHAA I KNEW THEY HAD TO MAKE UPDKLFJLKSDFJ UPDATE -explode- |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARTHLKFGJNLDKS;FJ SFWHY DID YOU LET HIM GO EMILY. YOU ARENT SUPPOSED TO LET HIM GO LAKSFJ,WRGFH DF SDLKFJ IM GOING TO EXPLODE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad that Emily and Patrick are back together. I wonder how he would had asked her. Probably something romantic to make for three weeks of not speaking to each other. Since you said there's six chapters left is there some more drama coming up? ;) Thank you so much for writing. This is one of my favorite story and I just love Emily and Patrick. Please post the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. update soon. i sense the story coming to an end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh thank goodness for that, they're actually FINALLY getting everything out in the open! can't wait for more ~ Alenor |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I totally thought that the last chapter was it and was really disappointed. I'm so glad that it wasn't. I love Patrick and Emily and am so glad that they're getting back together... FINALLY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! gah finally! they're makin up! ... they are making up right? :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D please update soon! p.s. jeremy is really really friggin annoying lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I officially hate cliffhagers. Great chapter, but I the end I felt stupid. I was so into it that I read you Authors ote thinking it was part of the stary I was like Wha? :D Hurry up, (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I... don't really have anything to say. Just that I read it and have no major complaints or ... uh... what would you call it? The opposite of a complaint? I dunno. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHH! Yes...Thanks for the update and I can't WAIT until the next one! :D |