Reviews for When Finally Set Free
christinaxxyo chapter 28 . 1/9/2010
This was so great! I loved Patrick, he was so amazing. Only if he existed... :P Anyways, I thought you did a really good job except for when Patrick was helping Emily after Ally's suicide attempt. I know you were trying to concentrate on Emily and Ally but I felt like Patrick lost himself. I think instead of being quiet and angry, he would have been cracking jokes and stuff to make Emily laugh. Besides that, I think you did a seriously awesome job :D
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Woww, not even a chapter in and I already like Patrick more than Jeremy. I desperately want to jump into the story and take Emily out to party or something, haha. :) As you can tell, I'm getting really into the story and I can't wait until I can read more. You did an amazing job on this chapter!
Alenor chapter 28 . 12/28/2009
yay, i'm glad they worked it out too! cya later ~ Alenor
innoc3nc3cuti3 chapter 28 . 12/28/2009
I finally got a chance to finish reading your story. Yay Emily and Patrick are together. Good job wrapping up the story with a happy ending.
Anaeli chapter 28 . 12/18/2009
heyy u!


jajaja! i love that in the end matt was drunk as always!

love it!

have you any other projects like this in mind?
Lyra Pocaterra chapter 28 . 12/16/2009
I really enjoyed this story! I'm so glad they got together, I liked Patrick from the beginning. Her ex boyfriend is such a jerk, I cant believe he cheated on her for a year! It would have been good to have a scene where Emily punches him, but the slapping was good too. Are you going to make a sequel?

Great story!
PeterMoore chapter 28 . 12/16/2009
amazing story
MelikaCalva chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
I thought this story was amazing! Do you have a beta? It is very clean and the spelling is good as well. I would like to reread it and maybe send you thoughts on every chapter...just tell me if you are going to pursue a re-write...and I would be happy to help. This is such a vivid and touching story!

53BookTitles chapter 28 . 12/15/2009

Happy ending, who.

I am so glad you finished it adn did an epilogue :)

I wish we got some Patrick POV, but hey - who am I to complain?

THank you so much for this amazing story :)

millie xx
citygrl chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
aw i do love this story and i am sad to see it end.

excellent work!
quotata chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
It's said to see a good story finish ... (

It's true we never figured out who keeps letting Kristen in.. AND why no one kicks her out as soon as they see her.

The things we'll never know.

I liked the first half of the epilogue, it summed up the main points really well, but something seems off when we go into the present day? Especially the feel of it after Pat's found in the kitchen? I can't plcae my finger on it, but it seems.. rushed? too direct?

However, I love a happy ending. awesome stuff!
AlexisLovesYou chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
YAY! Is there anything that you're planning on working on next or are already working on?
summers-end chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
Aww, I'm sorry to see this end :( But I loved it!

Have a great holiday!

Twizler519 chapter 28 . 12/15/2009
Lovely ending. Matt is such a sweetheart. Like a fairy god father.
Loveology131 chapter 27 . 12/4/2009
amazing that's all i have to say! :D
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