Reviews for When Finally Set Free
righthere431 chapter 23 . 11/17/2009
That's one messed up family.
Sraenel chapter 26 . 11/16/2009
Oh, cliffhanger. I love it. This story just keeps getting better and better.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/10/2009
Jermy should have told her when they broke up, and I don't blame Patrick for not telling her, but she should have been told at least from SOMEONE.
Alenor chapter 26 . 11/2/2009
yup, everything makes much more sense now. i can't wait for the next emily and patrick conversation though! i'm so glad ally moved near campus and emily is continuing school. can't wait for more ~ Alenor
righthere431 chapter 22 . 10/30/2009
Oh wow, poor Emily / Jeremy needs to leave her alone and her sister needs to chill even when she is sick.
annne chapter 26 . 10/28/2009
I love this story. It very well written. I dont like Ally at all she annoys me. But I like all the other characters except for Jeremy. Keep up the good job.
M chapter 26 . 10/27/2009
No it can;t wind down! IT CAN'T!

Glad to see Ally moving on and out! Great update!
summers-end chapter 26 . 10/27/2009
Oh my god, this chapter felt like a light at the end of a VERY long, VERY dark tunnel for Ally and Emily both!

Oh it was so if just this Patrick stuff could be resolved, everything would be just wonderful. Or at least on it's way to being wonderful.

That doctor Wainscot is super smart. I wish I'd heard more from her. Are Ally and Emily going to continue seeing her?

Update soon when you can! (I don't have midterms this semester, most my classes have three tests instead so they're divided into thirds and I'm in my second wave of stuff now but after this, I'll be all clear till finals yay!)

53BookTitles chapter 26 . 10/27/2009
I love Ally now!

I know, I change my mind a lot! ;)

Please continue and I hope that she goes and sees Jeremy, beats the crap out of him and then he apologizes and all is forgiven!

Also, maybe the 'new' girlfriend could have an STD, give it to Jeremy and then he could realise that she gave it to him and she's been cheating on him all along!

My perfect ending :). (Don't worry, I don't actually expect that to happen)

millie xx
quotata chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
I remember rushing through your chapters so I could "find out what happens next" so I apologise for not reviewing before. and if I have, it must have been scarce.

I swear Em and Patty should have been figure skaters.. they're always doing figure eights! hahaha

Thanks for the update! Although I agree that it was mean of you to leave a cliffhanger!
ShrimpoJewels chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
Finally Ally sees how irrational it was to be mad at Emily for going to school goodness gracious.

I think moving out was a good idea and props to the Doc 'cause now Emily can stay at school...

That's slightly mean to leave us hanging like that :-p

However let's hope Em forgives him
Cliche-All-Around chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
Man, I hope you make something awful happen to Kayla and Jeremy. like she was cheating on jeremy and he found out or some 'cliche' shit ahaha. Joking don't make it cliche but no one dies..

I feel really, in touch with this story. I get like that with stories so i feel grief when she found out about Jeremy.
Anaeli chapter 26 . 10/26/2009

um omygoddyousuck! LOL! You know im the worst reviewer ever!


Keep Writing and updtae son!
pattEcake chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
Well, we all know that she HAD to eventually get some roommate who used deoderant. I mean, really, Natalie? Really?
PeterMoore chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
i just want patrick and emily to kiss and make up
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