|Reviews for When Finally Set Free|
| Lady of Confusion chapter 26 . 10/26/2009
| Katie-Maude chapter 25 . 10/18/2009
I just refound this story and I'm glad I did. You had me crying both when Ally tried to commit suicide and when Emily found out that Jeremy had been cheating on her. I absolutely adore Patrick, despite (or perhaps because of) all his flaws. I hope you update soon, it is really a good story.
| Alenor chapter 25 . 10/18/2009
oh dear god, jeremy's even more of a tool that i'd realised! that's awful! i can't wait for more though. she definitely should've trusted her gut instinct. on the other hand, it looks like ally's a bit better... ~ Alenor
| ShrimpoJewels chapter 25 . 10/16/2009
So Patrick is right, it wasn't his thing to tell but at the same time I would of come clean eventually but he was right again when he said he was going to do it in private when he was sober and could be there for her...then you can argue why he didn't tell her while Jeremy and her were still together and I would have to say...it really sticky situation it really is...
I say Emily should forgive him and they should get back together :)
| Lady of Confusion chapter 25 . 10/16/2009
BAD DRUNK PATRICK! BAD! UPDATE ASAP!LOL
| M chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
Uh so much drama! Just get's better and better!
| Anaeli chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
Great chapter! please update soon!
| pattEcake chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
Hmm *rubs pretend beard* it's interesting, very, very interesting, young lady. Jeremy's a shmo. Or whatever that word is. And Patty's drunk. VERY drunk. Jeremy's a very shmo and Patty's a very drunk. Yeah. But she and her sister are getting along better, which is GR-REAT! (as Tony the Tiger would say)
| quotata chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
love the story.
there's been a lot of hurdles to cross for Em and Patty.. hopefully they can jump this one flawlessly too!
| PeterMoore chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
thanks so much for the update
| Downtown Detours chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
Great story. So much drama though aha.
Poor Em. This just proves guys suck! Sure Patrick should have told her but he told her in the worst possible way; while drunk in front of everyone.
I just hope creeper Jeremy is finally out of the picture though. And that Ally makes an effort to get better & that Em stands up more for herself.
Can't wait for future chapters.
| 53BookTitles chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
Go Emily! I hope she beats the shit out of Jeremy.
And splits up with Patrick for a while so that he can see how bloody awesome she is!
PLease continue :D
| refrigeratorelf chapter 25 . 10/15/2009
I really, really want to hit Patrick in the face. And I like him, so that says a lot. If Emily does forgive him (which she probably eventually should because guys have a tendency of doing incredibly stupid things when drunk) she should at least be really angry at him for awhile.
| summers-end chapter 25 . 10/14/2009
I kind of agree with Patrick-up until recently, who was he to tell Emily that Jeremy was cheating on her? Especially if he was interested in her all along because if he was, then she would have doubted his motives for wanting to break her and Jeremy up plus then Patrick would have been a douche, insulting the guy she's with to try and create a better opportunity for himself (Brandon, anyone?).
He did the right thing. But he told her in a terrible way. So he can apologize for that but not for not telling her earlier. And really, would Emily have believed it if someone had told her this a year ago? I don't know, I feel like she wouldn't have really until she heard it from Jeremy, she was too dependent on him.
I'm so glad Ally's getting better though! Especially cause it looks like Emily's going to need her support now.
| AlexisLovesYou chapter 25 . 10/14/2009
I think he just did.