Reviews for Random
dragonflydreamer chapter 3 . 8/7/2009
Overused topic, but you really did a lot to make it your own.

[Stroke my insecurities] I like the choice of the word "stroke." It feels conforting, yet condescending and dominating, like an owner to a pet.

I didn't particilarly like the section about numbness, though. It's an overused image for this topic.

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dragonflydreamer chapter 2 . 8/7/2009
I didn't like the word "cynicism" starting off. The meaning is powerful, but it's somewhat hard to say, so I got caught up on that rather than the line.

I like the tone of this, though. It's really chilling, almost literally sending a shiver up my spine.
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I like how it's like there's two layers to this, the phsycial like the socks and skin, and the phsycological like the alibis and lies. The way you tie them together so closely is powerful, expecially for such a short piece.

[Satin soft skin] I like what you did with those words. Both the formating and the alliteration really made the words into their meaning.

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TinyMusicalShore chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
That is pure awesomeness.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I love the first line. It's such an interesting description, but it fits so well. The italics work well in the piece too. Really nice job.

Thanks for your review a few weeks ago.