Reviews for Prayer on the Wind
a.little.whimsy chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I really like this - very sweet ending :)
A Rose in Weeds chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Wow extremely well written. especially the end

"A prayer on the wind that I love you"

keep writing.
Isca chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
"The ribbons of life." That's very vivid and philosophical.

"My bleeding heart beats on." That reminded me of 'The Tell-Tale Heart.' :)

Your word-choice is brilliant!

"Without the beauty and light of you." That line has such a 'sacred' quality to it!

"Withered wreck." Great alliteration!

What can I say Caitlin? Your poetry is phenomenal! :D

-Isca (Jess)