Reviews for Burning Dream
CherryBluegrey chapter 3 . 5/16/2009 Just wow.

'GLOMP' I am SO SORRY! I didn't mean to take so fricking long to send a review! Things have been...rough, in the last couple of months. I'm way behind on a lot of things. ; Still, my sincerest apologies.

Now. Onto the review. This chapter was fantastic! Where do I begin?

So, Alexis isn't human-or at least, not a full human. I never saw that coming. What a stunning twist! And not only that, but she's unaware of just how noticeable these 'changes' are becoming. I smell drama in the air.
CherryBluegrey chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Hey there. Sorry it took me SO LONG to review-things have been insanely hectic recently. But I'm here now.

Another stunning chapter. So, now Alexis has learned about what happened to her mother-the question is, will she believe it? So far...not very likely.

The Manticore bit really made me sit up. I'm quite curious now-I should look that up. But where on Earth did it come from? Well, I guess that's for you to know, and us to find out...eventually. ;

This story is really picking up the pace-and it's only the second chapter! I like! And you left off on a cliffy as well...ah, well. I'll be patient.

'hug' Take care. I shall be awaiting chapter three with bated breath.

Ja-ne. .
QuothTheWren chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Please do post the next chapter quickly! I don't think there's anything I can criticise here, you've written it really well.
CherryBluegrey chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Wow...this is absolutely stunning! A great beginning to what I am assured will be an engaging and unique story! Your descriptive skills are beautiful, and your character Lexi has me grinning, yet curious. She certainly is interesting, ne? And this Nicholas guy-I wonder how he's going to factor into all of this? Will he be good...or evil? Wonderful job so far, and many kudos to you for your obvious hard work on this. There were only a few, EXTREMELY minute errors that I could find-and they didn't kill the reading at all. I will be awaiting your next update. Ja-ne! .