Reviews for Look from the Other Side
mr. stranger chapter 4 . 7/24/2009
bother! oh bravo also I'm eager to read the rest.
mr. stranger chapter 3 . 7/24/2009
its rather good! whats the time frame?

you are missing so ceremonial lingo you abrieviate word when they need to belong and proper... it legend writting basics... I guess.

the devil come for you was a bit much... might want to use a demon instead.

any way kudos
QuothTheWren chapter 4 . 1/14/2009
:O banned you from your own laptop? Ah, I was wondering why no new chapters of your stories had been posted. I think this chapter's fine- plot-wise, it was interesting, and I like how the girl and the young man still aren't named. Maybe it's just stylistically that there's a problem. It's a little hard to explain, but seemed just a bit stilted in some places. But honestly, I wouldn't really have thought of it until after I read you were unsatisfied with it. Still, I reckon you've been doing really well with both your stories (and have certainly enjoyed reading both of them), and there's nothing much I can find fault with in either of them.
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Well, I liked it :D I thought it was sweet and cute. But I noticed that you used the word "young" to describe the boys a lot. But there's nothing wrong with that. I do that too. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
No, the dilouge about the devil and whatnot was fine. i think it fit in with the contex, and since they were speaking in old english, in an old time, I thought it fit well. Anyways, I'm interested in seeing what's gong to happen next! Update soon!
QuothTheWren chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
ooh, now it's getting really interesting! No, I don't think the line about the devil was too much- it sounded natural in context, and ws actually quite handy for setting the scene and whatnot. Looking forward to seeing what happens when he brings friends along!
QuothTheWren chapter 2 . 12/3/2008
Excellent! I'm always glad to read something a little different (which this one certainly is, in a good way). Only problem is, now I'm not sure whether I like this one or your first better :)
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
How did I find it? Well, I was looking at the just-in stories, and I saw a new one written by you. And so, I read it, and here I am now.

Anyways, ins't that kind of a bad thing if you're getting confused when you write your stories? Hehe, oh well, I get confused with my own stories sometimes too ;) Well, there were typos, nothing major. I feel bad for that girl. Having to be all alone with nothing but darkness around her. I am glad that boy shared some snack with her :D Well, I'm looking foward to seeing more!
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
I liked that last bit in your authors note about the mystery. It's ture; even my own stories are mysteries to me. Anyways, I thought it was interesting. I'd like to see more sometimes soon :D