Reviews for Racing Fate
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
Lol, her humor is funny!
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 6 . 4/28/2013
I really pity her...
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 5 . 4/28/2013
I actually thought this would happen a bit earlier.
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
Well, he's not very amused...
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
Lol, I really if it is a school or not.
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Yup, this heroine is my favorite type f them!
The 7th Flower-Violet Natalie chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Hmm, she's an interesting heroine!
Summer Blooms chapter 37 . 9/20/2012
Yay! This was a perfect ending! :D
Summer Blooms chapter 36 . 9/17/2012
This is amazing! IT's officially one of my favorite stories! :D PLEASE update really soon! :D
Summer Blooms chapter 33 . 9/17/2012
Is that Shinichi? He has horrible timing! XD
Summer Blooms chapter 18 . 9/17/2012
Whoa. What just happened? Will she have the same feelings for Sawachika now? And did he really know who she was in the first place?
F.R chapter 21 . 12/17/2011
It's finally winter break! I'm so glad I can read and review now! (Well, that's true if I ignore the work piled up beside me TT_TT... Teachers are evil, y'know. They give you work during breaks while they have fun somewhere else, not having to teach or grade anything.)

Anyways, I felt so nostalgic reading this chapter... remembering the times I would be so excited to see a new update, haha :D.

Sakurai was really hilarious this chapter! I could imagine his dishes and Miyuki gagging at the sight. Poor Haruka! I wonder what she had to go through before Miyuki came. I bet Kisetsu was annoyed. xDD

I only vaguely remember the part about Nozomu and Matsuri, so I felt like I was reading something new, which was nice. I deeply felt sorry for both of them... so tragic! (Not as much as Ame Agari, though :DD)

Well, happy holidays to you! (And instead of telling you to update soon, I hope /I/ can catch up with the updates soon!)
Matsui Saika chapter 20 . 7/23/2011
Hello again!

"...optimistically sarcastic..." I like that phrase for some weird reason. XD

"I'm not sure what that means, but I am guessing it's negative!" Sakurai cheeped.

Haha...ha... XDD What an enlightening conclusion, Sakurai. As if it wasn't obvious already! XD

Did I ever mention how much I like the dialogue in this story? To me, it's very natural and creative. I'm usually so conscious about pasting every single quote I like in the chapter, so I try to tone it down as much as possible XD.

Anyway... I seem to have a habit of getting off topic, huh?

I loved how Matsuri tried to change the subject. "I sure will miss Aoshima-senpai tutoring me." Oh, the irony!

I liked the little things you added and changed, like that "Anger takes multiple..." line and especially when Sakurai asked why'd Sawachika know. I don't remember him asking in the old version, sooo I think it's a good addition.

I really like Sakurai and Haruka. (Is there anyone I don't like? Haha.) Sakurai's so much weirder when Haruka's sick; it's funny XD.

I think you changed the last scene a bit? I really like the parts you added, though! It was a serious, dramatic scene, but my inner-self was screaming with glee as I read it XDD. MiyukixSawachika is truly one of my favorites in anime/manga/original story combined. (I can't express enough how much I want this to become a manga! I'd buy it :D)

"'You and Aoshima are not the same. No matter how well acted he was… I thought he was real. He was real to me, and that mask was-'

…who I loved."

Ouch.

I love this story, man! The characters, the humor, and the drama... so awesome :DD.

Chapter 21 next!
Matsui Saika chapter 19 . 7/23/2011
Hey. It's F.R. Long time no see! *avoids rocks thrown by you*

I'm really sorry! I'm almost ten chapters behind! Gah! (Took a college class this summer. Didn't know it was gonna be *that* hard, y'know?)

Okay! I'm done giving my excuse.

I love how you described Sawachika's eyes. I can imagine it clearly. (When I read this story, I always form a mental image of it, and it's all in anime form XD)

"And more importantly, that little confession incident a few weeks ago… I'd actually been telling the man himself!"

Actually, Miyuki dear, that was the first thing I thought of when I read the part where he revealed himself. Haha! XD My expression was something close to this: (O/O) "Oh my-! That is seriously-! It means that she was telling him all along! You are so evil, Kisara!"

"'How does it feel to be held like this by Aoshima Kazure,' he whispered, lowering his lips to my ear, 'the one you love?'"

Wow, Sawachika. You must be really asking for it. o.o

But I really feel sorry for him, though. I can only imagine how hard his life was, having to live with Kureno and all. I keep imagining how his life would've ended up if he hadn't met Miyuki. Would he be in jail? Or would he feel so hopeless that he'd commit suicide or what? (Now that's a morbid thought.)

Poor Miyuki as well. She's seriously unlucky. Her first love turned out to be her kidnapper in disguise. To me, her anger is justified. Can't imagine why Sawachika would add fuel to the fire, though. He seriously must have a masochistic streak XD. JK.

"I overheard Sakurai say to someone, 'Don't you get the feeling Miyuki-san really likes that new guy?'"

Sakurai is just so hilarious. Apparently, Miyuki likes anyone who she treats horribly. Kind of reminds me how Miyuki treats Sakurai, especially when he shamelssly asks for lunch. Maybe that's why Sakurai thinks that way. XD

"'Okay, that makes sense. You're right, as a woman this would be a very mysterious and unsettling location.'"

I can just imagine him saying that with a straight face. It's so funny XDD. Ahaha! And how Miyuki wanted to slug him after that. Actually, I'm rather amazed at how Miyuki can still act normally despite being in the same class as her kidnapper. And what I mean by normally is, not freaking out and/or being scared, etc. It's really not surprising; it's just different from how I think I'd handle the situation.

I really liked the last scene. I can feel the slight awkwardness and tension when Miyuki said that if he was anything like Aoshima, he'd cry if he was late. When Sawachika doesn't react in a way where Miyuki would "win," she immediately adds in the last line "But please, feel free to be late..." (My thoughts for this are surprisingly hard to explain. Hmm. Hope you get what I mean.)

Onto the next chapter! :D
Matsui Saika chapter 18 . 5/17/2011
Yes! Finally! The revelation!

Dun dun dun!

Seriously. This has got to be one of the unexpected twists I have read in my whole life. I really didn't expect it; it was just like, "WHAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTT?" Really. It's that epic.

Anyways, going back to the beginning...

"The nearer I am, the further I must go to reach you; the disconnected hearts in both of us." I am able to fully appreciate these italicized lines... When I first read this, I was just like, "Aww... that's cute." But now that I know how it incorporates in the story, it becomes deeper than just being sweet...

Ooohh... Ouch, Aoshima. Wonder what happened... I'm sure K's got something to do with it.

I was never surprised that Aoshima was with them... so I kept reading, thinking that there weren't anymore twists, and then BAM! I remember the agony of having to wait for the next chapter... What a cliffhanger!

Haha! It's nice reading this, thinking about my first reactions, and noticing different things. When I first read a story, I'm so excited to read what happens that sometimes, I don't notice the little details. It's fun to point out things I haven't noticed :D
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