Well, this is shaping up to be a good story :)

While I'm not a fan of how you've discribed the vampire of the story so far (I read twilight, and thats how i see vampires now) I will tolerate it for reading this story, because it sounds great :)

I love the sleazeball, and I hope some humorus events can come from his 'excited' nature :D

Also, Elizabeth sounds like a great woman, not one to be messed with... and I like that :)

Great chapter! I really like Jack...

RO! You had a author's note! YAY! You have no idea how happy that makes me...For some reason, hearing your author's notes always put a smile on my face. Great chapter, Ro. Really! Also, I can't wait till you put up TCO3 on FF. )

haha another awesome chapter! and i love sleezy jack! lol

To say this sounds intriguing would be an understatement.

hehe.

So far, this sounds really interesting and I would love to read more.

I have seen several Vamp. fic on FP and all surround the same topic:

Human girl falls for incredibly good looking, extremely lustfull guy.

And voila!

And yet, I love to read them!

So, I am VERY excited to read more of this!

kthnxbye,

Martin the Waterskier

This is really interesting, and I am already in love with this Jack character and we haven't even met him yet! lol. Can't wait to read more, it is really intriguing so far. And is Vladamir Tepes another name for Dracula? *confused*

Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!

i love it so far! i can't wait to read more!

~condawg13~

I like this alot .

It's Differnt and original.

Can't wait for the next chapter so HURRY and post !

Sounds VERY interesting...update plz!

Interesting. Definitely an interesting concept. :D Please update soon!

Great!

Hahahah lol )

I liked it )

RO! YAY! I'm so happy you finally posted!

I'm loving the story and missing you extra mucho much. D

Update soon, por favor!

I likes it!

Minor gammatical issues, you typed something in twice close to the bottom of the story. I do like the angle of a bunch of young adults/ adults going after the murderer of one of the girls father. It is really great. I hope you continue to write it.