Reviews for The Wind and the Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is BEAUTIFUL. :) AEJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. It reminded me of NYC standing on the Hudson in South Manhattan. I could feel the freezing, stinging water. I love cold and this is the perfect example of why I enjoy it so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O I love this poem , It has a great rhythm and is very sort of..Strong. If you understand. x.x Beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the beautiful imagery you create here- I could almost taste the salty water and feel the gusts along with the poem's speaker. There is a very eternal and calm feeling which just emanates from your words. Overall, sensual and and captivating :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful. Very calming, relaxing. Great job! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the wild imagery here :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Truly lovely poetry. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely imagery~~i love especially the last two lines~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's very vivid and I can feel/imagine it all. Nce job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never seen the ocean though I've heard and smelled it in my dreams, but its always stormy. A good simple one this, and I found no mistakes in it. I recommend you listen to "Morning Sun" by Savatage (they are known as Trans Siberian Orchestra now). |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are such an amazing writer! Probably one of the best on here. I loved this one just as much as I loved your shadow one. This one leaves me in such a calm mood, I feel like I'm right there in the wind by the water. I just recently posted 2 stories and I'd love if you could read and review them. Feedback from an author like you would mean the world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. such a pretty poem. I like it alot. ~Karrah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the repetition of the first sentenence on all the stanzas, it gave a feeling that you are certianly on task and know what you are doing. Narq. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, i love this, i can relate to the emotions. as i said, I've always been a child of the ocean. |