|Reviews for The Wind and the Water|
| Star Skies chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
| Arista Everett June chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
This is BEAUTIFUL. :)
| Penn Dalies chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
This was really good. It reminded me of NYC standing on the Hudson in South Manhattan. I could feel the freezing, stinging water. I love cold and this is the perfect example of why I enjoy it so much.
| MIDDLEOFNOWEHR chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
:O I love this poem , It has a great rhythm and is very sort of..Strong. If you understand. x.x
| SoulSecret chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
I love the beautiful imagery you create here- I could almost taste the salty water and feel the gusts along with the poem's speaker. There is a very eternal and calm feeling which just emanates from your words. Overall, sensual and and captivating :)
| Deletethisacc chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This is beautiful. Very calming, relaxing. Great job! _
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I love the wild imagery here :)
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Truly lovely poetry. :)
| kyox88 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
lovely imageryi love especially the last two lines
| words.for.you-DLS chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
It's very vivid and I can feel/imagine it all. Nce job!
| Jareth the Monk chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I've never seen the ocean though I've heard and smelled it in my dreams, but its always stormy. A good simple one this, and I found no mistakes in it. I recommend you listen to "Morning Sun" by Savatage (they are known as Trans Siberian Orchestra now).
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
You are such an amazing writer! Probably one of the best on here. I loved this one just as much as I loved your shadow one. This one leaves me in such a calm mood, I feel like I'm right there in the wind by the water.
I just recently posted 2 stories and I'd love if you could read and review them. Feedback from an author like you would mean the world.
| Around.the.Rainbow chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
such a pretty poem.
I like it alot.
| Narq chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I like the repetition of the first sentenence on all the stanzas, it gave a feeling that you are certianly on task and know what you are doing.
| starry-eyed-ocean chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
ah, i love this, i can relate to the emotions.
as i said, I've always been a child of the ocean.