This story sounds so good what happend to it (the rest)?

I would fully support this concept being printed - I'd pay so much money for it.

As an ACO fantasy lover this was pretty much my dream story. Shame it doesn't keep on. I don't normally read things that are not completed but I just had to read what was available. I am glad they were snippets though so I'm not too terribly invested.

But seriously. So funny and if you ever, ever keep doing this let me know ASAP. I can give you all sorts of ACO stories to create your fantastical elements.

I really enjoyed this story. I enjoyed encountering the various creatures, as well as Kir's clever wit. Thanks for sharing!

this is really interesting ! it feels and it doesn't, like megan derr's DWTD series ...their my favorite ... i hope you continue it someday!

:)

Okay, definitely can't wait for those two to get together.

*smirks*

It's gonna make some major steam when THAT fire and ice gets together.

XD

Hm. I love all of your stuff, but this one amuses me more than usual, for some reason. I love Kir's 'fuck off' attitude, and you're just killing me with curiosity about what he is. Anderson's antagonism towards the Animal Control is kinda irritating, but he seems to be improving. :) And I love the kitsune and dragon. But why do they stay in Kir's truck instead of go inside with him to work or stay at home?

Ah I love this story. Are all non-humans immortal, or just some? Kir and Anderson were so awkward at the end. Cute.

I love this story! It gets better with every word ~ will be waiting for updates

Kir is hilarious. He doesn't know know how to keep his mouth shut, and he doesn't even want to. The detective is cool too, but it seems that he's got a long way to go before he can match insults with Kir. I can't wait for your next update.

I was ~wondering~ why the detective seemed so suspicious.

Yay for plot development!

If you're wondering about my lack of differences in writing reviews, blame it on life. It's destroying my creativity.

So, this is good and interesting! Thank you for writing this.

Fenrir! And the serpent! I finally got that you were thinking about Norse mythology.

Also, Kir seems like a cool character. Not someone I'd want to work with, but nice to read and watch. Like House. I love House. _

This is really interesting. I mean, Animal Control Officer! I found that hilarious.

are you going to finish this?

... Well I can't say I'm not interested. I do have a question. Midgar serpent... FF7? Or did you not get it from there? Because if the Detective finds mostly FF7 pictures I'll laugh... HARD.

More soon, I hope. As always I love your stuff.

_RIOT_ Fenrir