*snigger*

So, is he gonna get together with Detective Pretty, then?

Though, I so think, sequel for the cowardly warlock. Give him his very own pookie. Maybe he'll get more self-confident and less scaredy-cay.

This story is really cool so far. I love the different kinds of creatures you keep showing. It makes me wonder what your going to reveal later on down the road.

Wow! This is great and interesting! I like Kir and his furry/scaley companions... interested in learning more about what Kir is/can do... can't wait for the next chapter!