Reviews for Thanks but No Thanks
x Farii chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
You SO should make a sequel to this xD
LittleMissProcrastinator chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Santa isn't real? D:

Anyway, this is adorable. I love stories written from kids' points of view where the reader knows more than the narrator.

"I’m not thankful to mom, because this letter is stupid." Typical kid opinion there. Really funny.

Thanks for posting this. :)
rosakissu chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
aw this is so cute,

I just can imagine Jackson, with a real cute toothless grin :)

I so wanna hug him, this goes right to my favorites, it made my day :)
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
aww it was a cute letter- Jackson's voice really shown through!

Did you ever write that oneshot between Jackson and Gracie? it sounds like it would be adorable to read... :D
chasing givenchy chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I like this better when I don't have to imagine romance between Gracie and Jackson; brilliant execution of a really cute concept. I loved how you got deep and dirty into Jackson's shoes, especially the part about Gracie being called "gross." Not only is the narrator not of the same sex as you, the writer, he's more than half your age. It's uncharted territory, but minus the perfectly grammatical syntax and lack of "joined-up handwriting" font, it was really convincing and made me lol.
Silencia chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
so cute! hehe, you made me hatethe mother... you're good!

Grtz Silencia
Karahly chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
Oh, you KNOW you want to make a sequel for this when they're grown up!

I know as a writer I wouldn't be able to don't make me flatter you to do so. :P

BUT I will anyway, I like my ego stroked once in a while too anyway.

Wonderfully funny, sweet, and brimming with potential!

Good Job. :)
GrannyP chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Oh, man, this made me giggle! Especially the part about the "not pressing vandalism charges" and calling the girl the cootie thing. That was pretty clever use of wording right there (if I am even making sense in my own wording). Ew... I just sneezed HUGELY and it completely ruined my train of thought for this review. Although, I'm not doing much reviewing now, am I?

Anyway, short and cute!
gulistala chapter 1 . 11/28/2008

D This is infested with childhood, that's great! I love all the naivety and the cute attempts at independence. D Wonderful. Congratulations on another job well done!
beeyouteefull chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Awesome job! I think you captured the child's voice really well! It would be really cute to see their relationship progress through a bunch of oneshots at different ages. Can't wait for the next one!
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
aww..this is adorable!
aurora borealis chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
How incredibly cute. :) I loved it. Those 40 minutes working time-stories often catch a feeling that the ones you work on for hours don't have.

And I'd love to see a one-shot with Jackson and Gracie from when they are older, because I'm also very much addicted to gushyness. ;)
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Hahaha, hilarious! I especially loved this since I'm a big sister - albeit there isn't much of a difference in our ages (eleven months apart, really) - but I love it.

"Kyle and I making the tree house Dad built for boys only, except to my sister Sammy. She can come since she can reach where mom hides the ice cream."


Rose-Rayne chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
*giggle* Quite amusing! Yes, I think you should write a one-shot. :D
Lardlax chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
I loved it! I want to read more about these characters and I really hope you do that oneshot one day :D
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