I was browsing through my favorites and read this again. You did a great job. I'm glad Brier's going to make him sweat it out; he needs to considering she was faithful to him for years and he wasn't! I'd love to read more of your work.

I love the story, its so cute! D LOL

#KASI.

Oh! That was an awesome story I really liked it! I know this comment won't count as much feedback for you, so I'm sorry, but I really don't have any remarks. I just think it's a wonderful one-shot and quite realistic Good job!

Um, wow. That was definately different. I liked it though. Some conflict & a solution. Good job!

this was so cute!he he..love it!

I loved this story!

awesome story...maybe you could continue it? it would be so cool if you would. :) you should really think about it

oh, that was so amazingly cute

i loved it so much that i kinda want more haha

i love the plot line

and brier is so adorable (how do you pronounce her name by the way?)

and benjamin

that last speech thing of his was so...

swoon haha

i loved it

izzie

Nice, this story is really original. I was looking for a story with a possible baby for the longest time, and here it is! And it's awesome.-Penne

Hahah, very cute. Loved the last line!

Creative twist with the pregnancy though.

Wow

I liked it. Not something I've seen before - which is, of course, a bonus.

:D

Would you like some pimento stuffed manzanilla olives? they taste weird...

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Amazing :)

I loved the plot, Brier and Benjamin.

It's nice that he didn't propose but wants to woo her.

Aw, I really loved it.

Sad that it's an one-shot, I would have loved to read more. :)

I absolutely loveed your story. Though I didnt really like Benjamin in the beginning but after he showed her the ring and stuff, you cant help cooing a little 'aww' )

Your writing skills are amaziing. Cheers!

I was wondering if this would have a happy ending. :) Thankfully, it does. :) This story's also an interesting look at how Benjamin morphs from 'asshole' to 'confused young man who didn't express himself very well' after he explains why they broke up after high school.

Good story! :)

I TOTALLY enjoyed this. You managed to make engaging characters and pack a whole bunch of drama and history into a one-shot. Any chance of a follow-up? Maybe around when the baby's born? I think he needs to grovel a lot more. Cause he was able to move on without a true regard to her heart. But great job and thanks for posting!