Interesting start. :D

I really like your story so far..it's definitely nothing ordinary which is why the plot seems to be so interesting. Waiting for more to come!

it kind of makes me understand why people go for this kind of business... :)) did I make sense?

this chapter's also pretty cool! UPDATE SOON! (:

this is pretty cool. :)

good job.

Hey, this is really good so far.

looking forward to more!

K

So, pretty much I saw USC in the title and started reading it.

It's really super good so far (: I think you could use some better description, but hey, I need to work on that too.

Update soon!