Reviews for Chasing Trent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story looks really interesting so far! Great job. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say! I'm going to come back and read more when I have time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job, I liked it. I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up and update soon, have fun in Spain! Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderous chapter! Boo hoo! I gotta wait a couple weeks for the next chapter? Oh God! Thanks for dedding me! Love ya! Ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job, I liked it. I wonder what happened. Lol. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay update! ) i really enjoyed this chapter, i liked how you threw in a new character (max) and he has an interesting background... and the name of the restraint, the Ultimatum (sp?) if i am correct an ultimatum is a drastic decision when it is hard to choose either available option...any reason you picked that name? or it just seemed to fit? lol ) cant wait for more ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, yay! another chapter! Thank you! I look forward to future ones, okay? You better keep this up! Ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Come on! You can't stop there! Why? Why-oh-why? How dare you? Okay...so I like it, and I really hope you update soon, my love! Okay? Okay! Ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. I like this so far! Remember, thoughts are just in italics, and you only use ' ' to quote inside diologue. Anything else, it would be best to just stick to italics :) Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trent x Gregory yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i love Trent...hes awesome! lol i seriously love this story...dont ever take it off this site P NICE twist btw...telling us about that ghost thats partly inside of him, i like it ) and i wonder what Trent will do...hmm.. ps- omg that was awesome 2 how he "kinda" found out that the other ghosts he's exorcised arnt "real" ghosts...lol cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay update! i LOVED this chapter...showed us more of his character and personality, and added a nice little twist to it ) do me a favor and keep it as exciting as the past 2 chapters ) cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh, i do like the sound of this story so far. You've gotten my hooked very quickly! I'm incredibly curious about Trent& how he died & what happened to gregory that he wants to forget? Questions you must answer by updating swiftly! (please :D) Theres a typo where you've meant to write Bus but have added another 's' on the end. :) I look forward to your update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats pretty cool, having a mother hen ghost for a pal. :D Ahahaha, i was going to review in the next chapter but that tickled my funny button so i thought i'd share that with you. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm..i really like it, this story has a LOT of potential...great idea ) only thing i would suggest is to add in somewhere how greg got to become an exorcist, cuz right now it almost seems like ANYONE could become one, but i doubt that is true P anyway, keep it up, cant wait for more! ) |