Reviews for Sushi Syndrome
Carson Rencal chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
This was a really cute Idea Yuki. I liked how you placed it together, however there were some simple spelling errors. So you may want to go back and read through it to see. I liked the characters too, you kept it basic, but had enough characters to keep it flowing main two characters personality's were a bit underdeveloped. Being a short story though, it started well and had an awesome ending to fallow. All in all it was really sweet. I think its awesome!