Reviews for peace forever
Everybody Everywhere chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Beautiful piece! I loved the line "mind you find peace at midnight," The diction worked really well as well as the rhyming (intentional or not) of mind and find. I also liked how the last line really tied in with the rest of the poem. It seems like throughout the piece, you're wishing something upon this person, and then in the last line you say why you're wishing this. A very nice close to a very nice piece. Keep writing!