|Reviews for When I met Ryan|
| TNT-Goes-BOOM chapter 5 . 3/30/2011
update soon! I really cant wait x)
| Brightheart chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
interesting twist in story.
plz go on.
| darknightstar chapter 4 . 1/19/2011
please update more! i have been checking this story for a while now! i really want to know what happens next!
| msallaroundperfect chapter 20 . 7/14/2009
I'm sorry about your dad. And if you need help rewriting your story, you know how to reach me. And I'm actually rewriting my first story too so don't hesitate to ask for help.
| lulu.lemon chapter 19 . 4/28/2009
LOVED this chapter, so good :)
And God bless everyone who in infected with the swine flu and I certainly hope that it does not spread any worse and that you and all of your loved ones are kept safe!
| You Got Me Going chapter 19 . 4/25/2009
Thanks for the update!
I really appreciate it.
I hope Mexico gets better
Best of luck of where you are from. Stay strong.
| msallaroundperfect chapter 19 . 4/25/2009
I send you my love. And great chapter. Of course update soon.
| moonlighthaterd07 chapter 18 . 4/19/2009
hey whats up PLEASE update
| margo roth chapter 18 . 2/25/2009
For some reason, I always find myself coming back to this story whenever I get the chance to read. I like it.
But there is one thing that is irritating me to no end.
It's your dialogue.
I'll use this section as an example:
Yes, I’m sure” He grabbed my cheek “Don’t tempt fate”
I'm no expert but I'm sure it would look a lot better if you used commas and periods, such as:
Yes, I’m sure,” He grabbed my cheek. “Don’t tempt fate.”
Yes, I’m sure.” he grabbed my cheek, “don’t tempt fate."
Well, I suppose there is a lot of ways to do it, but those are just a few.
Anyway, besides that minor detail, I find your story quite entertaining and I look forward to reading more soon.
And I also hope all goes well with your assignments and language lessons. (:
| luvreadin D chapter 18 . 2/21/2009
untill now the story was amzin..anewys hope u post up the nxt few chapters soon..
| msallaroundperfect chapter 18 . 2/20/2009
loved it. i don't like faith. I just don't... please don't ask me why.
| Sweet-Cakesz24 chapter 18 . 2/20/2009
it's going good so far. update soon!]
| Miss Mysteries chapter 18 . 2/20/2009
This is a great story. Hope you update soon.
| Sweet-Cakesz24 chapter 17 . 1/26/2009
Wow I guess Faith is going to be tough competition for her. I hope she wins. Anyways update soon I can't wait to read moree!D
| msallaroundperfect chapter 17 . 1/25/2009
Aw, why does she have to get suspensed from the music club? now she can't be in there with ryan anymore. darn! but I loved the chapter...