Reviews for His Majesty's Kingdom
plumblossom chapter 6 . 12/22/2008
I can hardly see how Robyn will end up more important in Derek's life than all this.

And didn't Derek's mother hear any of what went on between Derek and Greg?
Jasion Drake chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I get the impression all this meandering is going somewhere really interesting.

Don't disappoint! *glares*


Also, the girl in the hospital is most depressing and the parental reaction is very believeable writing.

And now I'll be on my merry way.
Narq chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
I haven't taken drugs either so I can't help you with that!

Good chapter though.

Nice work

Tariss-Lightning chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
Whoa! ... That was just... whoa!

Really good!

Very descriptive. And... strange, lol.

Brings to mind quite weird mental images.
Narq chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
WOW! great chapter! Really interesting! Of course I enjoyed it, how could I not?

I especially liked the way you described his feelings. Very well done.

Narq chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
aww... so... what happened to the kid? the sick one?


Narq chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Yup! I certainly enjoyed this story... it's very entertaining!

Freaky Fred chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
"...broken and bloody noise."

Did you mean "nose"?

Dang, do thirteen year olds really get into those kinds of fights? I went to a magnet school for sixth-eighth grade, so I've been sheltered from whether or not that stuff really happens.

Two stories in one day! Yay!
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