|Reviews for His Majesty's Kingdom|
| plumblossom chapter 6 . 12/22/2008
I can hardly see how Robyn will end up more important in Derek's life than all this.
And didn't Derek's mother hear any of what went on between Derek and Greg?
| Jasion Drake chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I get the impression all this meandering is going somewhere really interesting.
Don't disappoint! *glares*
Also, the girl in the hospital is most depressing and the parental reaction is very believeable writing.
And now I'll be on my merry way.
| Narq chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
I haven't taken drugs either so I can't help you with that!
Good chapter though.
| Tariss-Lightning chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
Whoa! ... That was just... whoa!
Very descriptive. And... strange, lol.
Brings to mind quite weird mental images.
| Narq chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
WOW! great chapter! Really interesting! Of course I enjoyed it, how could I not?
I especially liked the way you described his feelings. Very well done.
| Narq chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
aww... so... what happened to the kid? the sick one?
| Narq chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Yup! I certainly enjoyed this story... it's very entertaining!
| Freaky Fred chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
"...broken and bloody noise."
Did you mean "nose"?
Dang, do thirteen year olds really get into those kinds of fights? I went to a magnet school for sixth-eighth grade, so I've been sheltered from whether or not that stuff really happens.
Two stories in one day! Yay!