Reviews for His Majesty's Kingdom
Jasion Drake chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I get the impression all this meandering is going somewhere really interesting.

Don't disappoint! *glares*


Also, the girl in the hospital is most depressing and the parental reaction is very believeable writing.

And now I'll be on my merry way.
Narq chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
I haven't taken drugs either so I can't help you with that!

Good chapter though.

Nice work

Tariss-Lightning chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
Whoa! ... That was just... whoa!

Really good!

Very descriptive. And... strange, lol.

Brings to mind quite weird mental images.
Narq chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
WOW! great chapter! Really interesting! Of course I enjoyed it, how could I not?

I especially liked the way you described his feelings. Very well done.

Narq chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
aww... so... what happened to the kid? the sick one?


Narq chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Yup! I certainly enjoyed this story... it's very entertaining!

Freaky Fred chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
"...broken and bloody noise."

Did you mean "nose"?

Dang, do thirteen year olds really get into those kinds of fights? I went to a magnet school for sixth-eighth grade, so I've been sheltered from whether or not that stuff really happens.

Two stories in one day! Yay!
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