Hey, nice imagery there with the broken disc - works really well.

Dance is actually a great metaphor for life. I love this verse:

you threw things into shuffle

and turned it up too loud

we have different drummers

belong to different crowds

Your capitalization was all over the place, which I didn't like. I also think certain things were repetitive like broken in the first stanza (after the line) and through in the second one. Still, the piece is really relateable and very bittersweet. I really love the metaphor in the beginning about music. Nice job.

I LOVE this one! I can compleatly relate to it! I love how you mixed dancing and song into it. Great job as always.

Turtles