|Reviews for dance|
| InkyPink chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Hey, nice imagery there with the broken disc - works really well.
Dance is actually a great metaphor for life. I love this verse:
you threw things into shuffle
and turned it up too loud
we have different drummers
belong to different crowds
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Your capitalization was all over the place, which I didn't like. I also think certain things were repetitive like broken in the first stanza (after the line) and through in the second one. Still, the piece is really relateable and very bittersweet. I really love the metaphor in the beginning about music. Nice job.
| CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
I LOVE this one! I can compleatly relate to it! I love how you mixed dancing and song into it. Great job as always.