Reviews for To Overcome
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Really great descriptions you have in this! I usually pick out specific lines that I like, but I honestly loved just about every sentence. Your words create such vivid images and piece together smoothly.

[the sent of blood] I think you meant scent.

[leading only to the death of the child] Interesting subject. So many poems are about teenagers, it's interesting to see one exploring a child. Reminds me a lot of Wordsworth's "Lucy Gray."

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
DanceLikeNo-oneIsWatching chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Listen. I'm really sorry. If you want to see my full apologies, go to my profile. If you don't, then you can't say I didn't try. I have tried everything to contact you.