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Penpaperaser chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
It's beautiful. I like the rhyme scheme, and this line: "In his arms, I am nothing but his clay to mold" It's just one of those lines that strikes a chord with you. Love this poem :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I absolutely love this. So sweet and simple but strong emotion lies in it. Wonderful job! Beautifully written

Adding to my favorites
addicted2storiz chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
What I love most about stories is when I feel like I can really relate to the message they are conveying. Your prose, I'm assuming, is you putting your feelings into words, and as someone who's experiencing the same thing now, I just wanted to say that you did an amazing job. You don't know how accurate your words are to describe my life right now; I can utterly relate to those words. That aside, this seems to be pure emotion and is very well written- I love the wording, the language, the simple yet effective words and perfect rhymes. I just wanted to let you know that your writing made an impact on someone.