I feel so sorry for the boy. u.u But it's his fault for wearing the pin even though it was for his friend.

Still..

A bit weird one shot. But still different. And I liked it anyway. xD

Had few French mistakes.. But it was good anyway. n.n

Wow! Very good read. Very nice. Even if I didn't understaned the French part that well I loved it.

The way you wrote it was cool...but its so sad are you sure its jsut a oneshot?

It's interesting to see a rape fic in the P.O.V. of the rapist. Very Original.

Can I have the translations of the boy's dialogue? I understand most of it, but some is a little fuzzy (I only took two weeks of French _;;)

Ciao,

Trii

It wasn't that bad... Actually, it was pretty good :) A really original story, that's it :D

Only a correction that Kalista missed: the imperative form of the verb "arrêter" when "vous" is the subject would be "arrêtez!", not "arrêter!", wich is the infinitive form (but my French is a France's one; maybe they say "arrêter!" in Canada :) ).

Saludos,

Bell.

PS: In case you want to reply me, I've got an account here with this nickname. Sorry if there is any English fail /

cool to see them interact more especially if the american boy learned more french and how their relationship or lack of one would play out oh and sorry about the split review tis an accident.

hey this is has an awesome plotline and i wish you would turn it into a sorry it would be

I would say I'm 'returning the favor' but that sounds dirty, especially after reading this. I hate searching for stories to read, so I usually read the ones from the people who have reviewed me.

And... well... Okay. At the beginning of the one-shot, well, hehe, I got this feeling I was reading a story just made for the sake of sex. But as it went on and the douche American boy starting getting way too physical with the little Frenchmen, I was thinking to myself that... ouch. Oral rape sucks.

Good one-shot, though! I only recognize the French that my cousins say when they're complaining about something... so I guess that means 'stop' and 'please'?

Didn't get the french words, could you please tell what the meaning was? Nice fic, by the way!

smile... ah a French boy.

You make some french mistakes (nothing big)

here:

"Je deteste toi." - Je te deteste.

"Je suis aller tuer toi. Je te deteste! Je vais te tuer.

Otherwise every original scenario~

I should be careful when I serve customers... 0_o...

I went and translated the french cus I suck at it...wrong word for this particular story so I'll say I'm rubbish at it.

Anyway I actually really liked it and like Spelled out you don't know what to expect. Especially not the main character to be the rapist, so it was great. The main character's are always so nice or mean but turn out nice. This guy was just a dick (I'm expecting *'s so I'll say male repoductive part). So yeh you should do some more one-shot's especially if they're as unpredictable as this (which I expect they will be). :D