She was pretty careless with the signs of affection especially when her fiancée was there, though the guilt was good to see there.

Michael problem out...or is it?

Anyways, I liked seeing the bond with her and Cameron.

Aw, poor Micheal. I was wondering there for a second what Cameron was doing kissing her in front of him, but then you explained it hehe. I don't worry too much about the time it takes to update cause I'm really slow at my updates soo...

Anywho, loved this chapter. It made me laugh even though it's probably not a spot where I'm supposed to laugh...hmm.

Lich Queen

Awe, poor Michael!( He has every right to be angry! (Sorry Olivia)

-Arianna

The chapter I've been waiting for! Cameron and her are so right for each other. I really liked and enjoyed this chapter.

I love this story so far! Please write chapter 4 soon cause I am hating this cliffhanger. Cameron is so sweet! I wish all guys could be like that. :) I'm not really liking Micheal (im not sure I spelt his name right) cause he gets angry to much. Honstly, if he wants to know if Olivia's cheating on him, he should ask her that exact thing. Maybe get a straight answer out of her. hehe

So, anywho, I kinda liked the last option you had there. The one about them becoming mermaids after having sex. It seemed the best to me, but I dunno.

Please continue this story asap, oh and btw, I think MnM's without peanuts are better :0.

Lich Queen

Ee, sweet story!

Okay, I'm not sure if you figured out the whole mermaid thingy, but this just popped into my head... probably needs a bit (a lot!) of fine tuning, but you wrote that he had given her a necklace, and maybe that necklace, or rather the pearl (did you say it was a pearl necklace?) had something to do with it,

i.e ... well I dunno, maybe it cut her? (too vampiric haha)

or, maybe when they had sex, it triggered something. Anyways, my point being, that was a pearl (in the necklace) for lovers, and it would enable them to live forever... together (Geesh that sounds cheesier than I thought)

ANYWAYS

I love this story, keep writing!(please)

(PS, if, by some freak of nature you decide to use the necklace, please, for the love of all that's... not cliche? don't say he got it from an old thrift store or something...)

Anyways (again),

It's really cute

-Arianna

So he honestly thinks he's being cheated on? Ha ha! I wonder what he would think of the real truth! Also, get back to the whole Olivia and Cameron thing. I'm dieing to find out what happens next!

Oh, and if you don't get as many reveiwers here, don't worry. It's a lot harder here than on fanfiction.

~Freedom Flyer

P.S. If you everfeel like reading some good one shots, I have lots. Reviewing on them is always good to. (hint hint hint!)

i LIKE! update soon!

Wow! Great job! This story has lots of potential and I think that you can keep it going nicely. Again, great job!

~Freedom Flyer