Reviews for If you could only see
A.H. Fenald chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Aww...(there is tugging at my heartstrings).

Now is the person very cold and cruel or do they not really see the person existing? I have both of the sencories (ugh...I can't spell that word!) running in my head. Either way, it works with the poem.

I like your format by the way.
DiaRose chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
This is nice... relatable. I love some of these lines, they're very lovely.

Love,

Dia
DrownMySoul chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
You're imagery and visual skills are detailed yet not, making you feel things, but not see them, like real emotions.

This is my favorite style of writing.