|Reviews for In God's Image|
| wynative02 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Just remember, we all fall short of his greatness. Again great job.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
this is a nice spiritual poem. the only bothered me was the word "mold" i don't know, it didn't seem right to me. other than that though i enjoyed it:)
| Graveside Rose chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
This had a nice flow. Though the last line didn't seem to fit in with everything else.
Never the less, its a really good peice.
Keep up the good work.
| Adia Moonstar chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Beautiful. Short and Simple- :D
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Omg I love this.
"Do with me as you wish."
I adore lines like this, and the sense of absolute trust and love for Him. I don't know what to say anymore o_o I can't comment on poems that are absolutely amazing because there's just nothing to say! LOVED IT!
| K. Molle chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
I think its a perfect view of a "christian". Really they are puppets to a book that may or may not be real. Good use of words; and if your wondering no I do not believe in god.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This is an intresting poem. Some things to consider:
1. "Mold me" could be "Mould me to reflect your perfect grace."
2. "Use me" could be "Use me as an example of your infinite mercy."
This is an intresting poem/prayer.