Reviews for This Is So Wrong
ToBreakMyFall chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
thats just wrong XD i cant believe i kept reading lol im weiird like that
hellosorrowtomorrow chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
:) Very sweet story..Truly!

The nightmare was a bit short and straight to the point though.

Other than that, I loved it.

I kind of imagined that they were a bit young though..No idea why.
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Great! Loved it!
Lea Lucarelli chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Wow, Loved it. Despite the graphic and incest, it was great.

I think incest is an interesting topic to write a story about.

It is all done?

Please no, i like it.

Keep it going, okay? It'd be interesting to see how everything would work out for the boys.

Cute names also!
Paladin'sMysticPhantasy chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
It was rushed. You should have slowed it down a bit.
blurrylights chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
I have to agree with Kittyinjurface...I thought story was pretty terrible too. There was no emotion, and it was so unrealistic. Who ends off a statement with "oh, and your father has prostrate cancer?" Really unrealistic...and very boring/gross. You could have made it much better.
Sour Plums chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
You know, I'm not usually this blunt, but I thought this story was horrible. It was absolutley bland, and much too quick. All I saw were words, I didn't get any emotion. And in the end, it was just some fantasy about two brothers screwing.