Reviews for Southern Comfort |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to agree with LeenaAmara below - this is far from your best work. It's haphazard and confusing, with a number of spelling and grammatical errors early on. Most troubling is that the characters' reactions are often unrealistic or irrational, and conversations/dialogue between them sometimes makes no sense. There's also a lack of clear growth from the main character. It's as if she takes one step forwards two steps back over and over and over. It gets tiring to read after a while. The story has ahelluva lot of potential - great plotline, really - but it needs a substantial amount of editing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this story...it was really good i miss it |
![]() ![]() ![]() You haven't updated in a while and I'm not sure how I found this story but I'd really like to keep reading anything you put up for this. So update soon! I really like your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, omg, omg ,omg! he kissed her! great story, love it... but tone down the self-sympathy and drama will ya? |
![]() ![]() uhmayzing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally, so much built up tension...is she going to stay or leave? |
![]() ![]() Oh it's just so wonderful! GREAT chapter! I simply cannot wait to see what else happens! M |
![]() ![]() update! :[ i'm anxious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, he kissed her? Please update soon and make her warm up to him a little. |
![]() ![]() bahaa. i can hardly wait for the next chapter. this story srsly blows my panties off. keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh i was hoping he would do that soon! lol cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your work. I really do. But this is...not good. Sorry. It's all over the place, the conversations are all over the place and don't make sense at all. I don't mean the words, I mean the reactions, the emotions. None of it. It feels hastily written and unrealistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I know the update has been long-awaited, but at least you got it out! I haven't updated my story in like three months so...yeah my readers probably have me torched on mental stakes or something. Anyway, nice update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! i have read all the chapters so far and have loved them all. Your description and characters are amazing ). |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm so excited the story was updated! can'tw ait for the rest |