Reviews for Southern Comfort
Abrasive chapter 14 . 10/5/2011
I have to agree with LeenaAmara below - this is far from your best work. It's haphazard and confusing, with a number of spelling and grammatical errors early on. Most troubling is that the characters' reactions are often unrealistic or irrational, and conversations/dialogue between them sometimes makes no sense.

There's also a lack of clear growth from the main character. It's as if she takes one step forwards two steps back over and over and over. It gets tiring to read after a while.

The story has ahelluva lot of potential - great plotline, really - but it needs a substantial amount of editing.
palmsaresweaty chapter 14 . 5/30/2010
please update this story...it was really good i miss it
TammyS3 chapter 14 . 5/16/2010
You haven't updated in a while and I'm not sure how I found this story but I'd really like to keep reading anything you put up for this. So update soon! I really like your story.
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 14 . 1/17/2010
Omg, omg, omg ,omg! he kissed her! great story, love it... but tone down the self-sympathy and drama will ya?
fvdsgdsgdslivejournalfriend chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
uhmayzing.
violet-eyez chapter 14 . 7/28/2009
finally, so much built up tension...is she going to stay or leave?
M chapter 14 . 7/22/2009
Oh it's just so wonderful! GREAT chapter! I simply cannot wait to see what else happens!

M
known chapter 14 . 7/16/2009
update! :[ i'm anxious.
kirstenb.0319 chapter 14 . 7/15/2009
Oh my god, he kissed her? Please update soon and make her warm up to him a little.
treasure chapter 14 . 7/13/2009
bahaa. i can hardly wait for the next chapter. this story srsly blows my panties off. keep it up.
JadeDream chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
ooh i was hoping he would do that soon! lol cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon!
LeenaAmara chapter 14 . 7/9/2009
I like your work. I really do. But this is...not good. Sorry.

It's all over the place, the conversations are all over the place and don't make sense at all. I don't mean the words, I mean the reactions, the emotions. None of it.

It feels hastily written and unrealistic.
kirstenb.0319 chapter 13 . 6/10/2009
Hey! I know the update has been long-awaited, but at least you got it out! I haven't updated my story in like three months so...yeah my readers probably have me torched on mental stakes or something. Anyway, nice update.
the.5.elements chapter 13 . 6/8/2009
Awesome story! i have read all the chapters so far and have loved them all. Your description and characters are amazing ).
M chapter 13 . 6/8/2009
Great chapter! I'm so excited the story was updated! can'tw ait for the rest
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